Monday, 12 August 2019
The Titanic
We were learning about the Titanic.
I enjoyed writing about it.
It was hard to spell all the words.
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Hi Henry, We really enjoyed reading your story and your cool painting of the Titanic. We liked how you used the word swallowed to describe the ship sinking. We are a year 4/5 class at Makaraka School that studied the Titanic in term one. Did you know that there was so many things that went wrong before the Titanic sunk including that there was a fire in the hull that damaged the boat and that the key for the binocular cabinet had left the ship in a pocket of an officer that was fired!
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